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“You can never be too rich or too thin” According to Posh Spice anyway. Scan the covers of any glossy fashion magazine and you are sure to be greeted by rail thin, anorexic looking models, accompanied by bold headlines screaming for your attention with captions like: “How To Loose Those Pounds In 24 Hours” or “Liposuck Your Fat Away!” All this to achieve the worldly ideal of being model thin. The high prevalence of obesity and overweight problems in our culture means much more emphasis is placed on losing weight rather than gaining it, so much so it is easy to forget about people on the other end of the scales who have the problem of being too thin.

Being skinny might be an unattainable goal for some, a virtue to yet others, but to me, it is a major drawback. For one, I never am able to find a pair of jeans or any clothing in my size, as most of the designers cater to European sized frames, so an Extra Small size could well translate into a Medium in this country. To add insult to injury, the salesgirls would usually suggest I check out the kids department to find a fit. Ouch! I don’t suppose that is too far off because I once wore my 10 year old sister’s shirt to a function and no one seemed to notice the fact that it was cut for a child. Having said that, most of my clothes, especially my jeans have to be sent to the tailor for a refitting to prevent it from falling to my ankles. It is an unnecessary service that costs time and money, but it’s a heck of a lot better than rummaging through the juniors section.

Still want to be skinny? If you’re a girl, you might want to rethink your bid. Being severely underweight can make it difficult for a woman to conceive. One of the reasons for this is that body fat is essential in the reproductive process. In women with extremely low levels of body fat menstrual cycles can become very irregular and sometimes nonexistent. When the menstrual cycle is thus affected so is ovulation. Body fat also helps in the release of hormones that are necessary for the body to produce the egg. The good news is if infertility is due to being underweight there is a simple and usually effective solution. Gaining weight reverses the negative effects in most cases of infertility caused because the woman who is underweight.

Speaking of which, another drawback to being stick thin is that it creates an illusion of healthiness, when in fact, it could be the total opposite. Naturally thin people do not see the need to exercise as they feel they can’t afford to loose another pound, but lack of physical activity can prove detrimental to their health in later life. Being genetically lucky, the underweight are also unlikely to watch their diet. Although their high metabolism might prevent them from piling on the pounds, this does not exclude them from adhering to healthy eating habits as heart problems are no respecter of kilograms.

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“You can never be too rich or too thin” According to Posh Spice anyway. Scan the covers of any glossy fashion magazine and you are sure to be greeted by rail thin, anorexic looking models, accompanied by bold headlines screaming for your attention with captions like: “How To Loose Those Pounds In 24 Hours” or “Liposuck Your Fat Away!” All this to achieve the worldly ideal of being model thin. The high prevalence of obesity and overweight problems in our culture means much more emphasis is placed on losing weight rather than gaining it, so much so it is easy to forget about people on the other end of the scales who have the problem of being too thin.

Being skinny might be an unattainable goal for some, a virtue to yet others, but to me, it is a major drawback. For one, I never am able to find a pair of jeans or any clothing in my size, as most of the designers cater to European sized frames, so an Extra Small size could well translate into a Medium in this country. To add insult to injury, the salesgirls would usually suggest I check out the kids department to find a fit. Ouch! I don’t suppose that is too far off because I once wore my 10 year old sister’s shirt to a function and no one seemed to notice the fact that it was cut for a child. Having said that, most of my clothes, especially my jeans have to be sent to the tailor for a refitting to prevent it from falling to my ankles. It is an unnecessary service that costs time and money, but it’s a heck of a lot better than rummaging through the juniors section.

Still want to be skinny? If you’re a girl, you might want to rethink your bid. Being severely underweight can make it difficult for a woman to conceive. One of the reasons for this is that body fat is essential in the reproductive process. In women with extremely low levels of body fat menstrual cycles can become very irregular and sometimes nonexistent. When the menstrual cycle is thus affected so is ovulation. Body fat also helps in the release of hormones that are necessary for the body to produce the egg. The good news is if infertility is due to being underweight there is a simple and usually effective solution. Gaining weight reverses the negative effects in most cases of infertility caused because the woman who is underweight.

Speaking of which, another drawback to being stick thin is that it creates an illusion of healthiness, when in fact, it could be the total opposite. Naturally thin people do not see the need to exercise as they feel they can’t afford to loose another pound, but lack of physical activity can prove detrimental to their health in later life. Being genetically lucky, the underweight are also unlikely to watch their diet. Although their high metabolism might prevent them from piling on the pounds, this does not exclude them from adhering to healthy eating habits as heart problems are no respecter of kilograms.

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—-Changes in Body Weight: Freshman 15

Today, many freshman students don’t know how to handle their eating habit and physical activity in a right way due to the new environment. Why have people always said freshman 15. Is this just a myth or truth? Some research shows that freshman students are lacking of physical exercised and eating three meals at a buffet-style dinning hall caused them weight change. Did students concern about their health from gaining weight? Gaining weight might appear minor for body in a short term, but it can cause serious health problems in a long term. In order to avoid those problems students must eat balance and do amounts of exercise to stay with a healthy lifestyle through all four years of college. The two study reports “The “freshman 5” A Meta- Analysis of Weight Gain in the Freshman Year of College” authors Rachel Vella-Zarb and Frank J. Elgar and the “Change in Body Weight and Fat Mass of Men and Woman in the First Year of College-Study of the “Freshman 15” authors Daniel J. Hoffman, Peggy Policastro, Virginia Quick, and Soo-Kyung Lee , argues that it is important to identify the exact causes behind weight gain changes and know how to devise appropriate prevention strategies to the students. Although both articles have collect good data about what are the factor effect student being overweight, Vella-Zarb did a better job by giving stronger details from a wide-ranging of year study with 3401 students, establishing Hoffman’s articles are weaker with only 67 students in the study.
One of the weight gain problem issue “The “freshman 5” A Meta- Analysis of Weight Gain in the Freshman Year of College,” Rachel A. Vella-Zarb , MA of psychology department, and Frank J. Elgar, PhD of psychology department at Carleton University. Vella-Zarb and Elgar cite their research from twenty-four studies that published in the year between January 1985 and April 2008 to support the conflict of freshman weight gain and the prevention strategies (Vella-Zarb & Elgar 163). The article examined several factors that associated with weight gain: low physical activity levels throughout the year, high junk food consumption, recent dieting, evening snacking, and a combination of dietary restraint and living in residences (Vella-Zarb & Elgar 164).Through the investigation, Vella-Zard and Elgar concluded that greater understanding of freshman weight gain could lead to prevention of this weight gain and thus a decreases in overweight and obesity among young adults (Vella-Zard &Elgar166).In particular, Valla-Zard and Elgar comments, “college health care providers should design weight gain prevention programs for first year students” meaning that programs should require for students to attend and give skills to prevent from weight gain, such as stress and lifestyle habits that can cause the factors of gaining weight instead of telling them started to eat less (Vella-Zard & Elgar 165).College should give a right message for students to balance their intake and exercised, buffet-style is all you can eat, but also mean need to moderate balance energy intake and expenditure in body weight, otherwise many student will end up with gaining weight unless they get greater understanding how to stay with a healthy life.
The other article entitled Change in Body Weight and Fat Mass of Men and Woman in the First Year of College-Study of the “Freshman 15”detail by Daniel J. Hoffman, Peggy Policastro, Virginia Quick, and Soo-Kyung Lee, faculties in the Department of Nutritional Sciences at Rutgers, the State University of New Jersey in New Brunswick. They examine weight change from focus on a sample of freshman, who attending the State University of New Jersey. The method they used to determine the weight change is not powerful enough and it is harder to believe those facts only from 64 students .Therefore, the result of the study finding that students didn’t pay much attention in their intake and outtake during a new environment, which cause them weight keep increasing. Hoffman concluded that “students recognize that weight changes seemingly minor and perhaps even harmless changes in eating or exercise behavior may result in large changes in weight over an extended period of time” (Homan43). In particular, Hoffman states, “For those students who experience weight gain over the period we studied, if their energy balance is not controlled, they could placing at risk for obesity and chronic diseases later in life” (Hoffman 45) which mean take controlled of what they eat is important for the solution.
Overall, both journal articles have credible issues about the reasons of weight gain, because the information proves that is coming from valid experiments, which make the reader more believable. Both studies also provides similar claim for their supporting reason to prevent weight gain among students entering college is great and it is impor

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“You can never be too rich or too thin” According to Posh Spice anyway. Scan the covers of any glossy fashion magazine and you are sure to be greeted by rail thin, anorexic looking models, accompanied by bold headlines screaming for your attention with captions like: “How To Loose Those Pounds In 24 Hours” or “Liposuck Your Fat Away!” All this to achieve the worldly ideal of being model thin. The high prevalence of obesity and overweight problems in our culture means much more emphasis is placed on losing weight rather than gaining it, so much so it is easy to forget about people on the other end of the scales who have the problem of being too thin.

Being skinny might be an unattainable goal for some, a virtue to yet others, but to me, it is a major drawback. For one, I never am able to find a pair of jeans or any clothing in my size, as most of the designers cater to European sized frames, so an Extra Small size could well translate into a Medium in this country. To add insult to injury, the salesgirls would usually suggest I check out the kids department to find a fit. Ouch! I don’t suppose that is too far off because I once wore my 10 year old sister’s shirt to a function and no one seemed to notice the fact that it was cut for a child. Having said that, most of my clothes, especially my jeans have to be sent to the tailor for a refitting to prevent it from falling to my ankles. It is an unnecessary service that costs time and money, but it’s a heck of a lot better than rummaging through the juniors section.

Still want to be skinny? If you’re a girl, you might want to rethink your bid. Being severely underweight can make it difficult for a woman to conceive. One of the reasons for this is that body fat is essential in the reproductive process. In women with extremely low levels of body fat menstrual cycles can become very irregular and sometimes nonexistent. When the menstrual cycle is thus affected so is ovulation. Body fat also helps in the release of hormones that are necessary for the body to produce the egg. The good news is if infertility is due to being underweight there is a simple and usually effective solution. Gaining weight reverses the negative effects in most cases of infertility caused because the woman who is underweight.

Speaking of which, another drawback to being stick thin is that it creates an illusion of healthiness, when in fact, it could be the total opposite. Naturally thin people do not see the need to exercise as they feel they can’t afford to loose another pound, but lack of physical activity can prove detrimental to their health in later life. Being genetically lucky, the underweight are also unlikely to watch their diet. Although their high metabolism might prevent them from piling on the pounds, this does not exclude them from adhering to healthy eating habits as heart problems are no respecter of kilograms.

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In “The Gospel of Food” by Barry Glassner believe that a fast food industry changes our culture with food and health issues. The poor, middle class, and adolescents fall in the category of the ethnic restaurant that is cheap. Now a day, people are getting to lazy to take time to at least make a sandwich or to use their manners without grabbing the food with their hands. Society will always change their culture, it does not matter if someone eats a burger with there hands or dine at a place where the food is cheap. Attending daily to a fast food area is a problem people need to learn how to limit there cravings for a hamburger.

Malnutrition has always been a problem in the community. As Bailey Burritt states that bad eating habits occur by “ignorance not poverty”. Anyone has the choice to eat a healthy and a balanced diet. Taking time to cook a meal for the family prevents issues with food crisis. Food poisoning always occurs at a fast food their products are not healthy. These food are kept processed, who knows if the meat is not spoiled. Children spend most of there time at the fast food chains and less in activities. Obesity, heart disease, and high cholesterol happen frequently when consuming fast food daily. Social status is changing because of these restaurants. Foreigners that come to America experience the difference of food and culture. Adolescent from France, prefer “self service aspect, absence of table settings, utensils, and the usual rules of etiquette”. The French tradition is to always eat at the fanciest restaurant with utensils and a posture of high class.

I’m of two minds about Barry Glassner’s claim that the food chain changes our customs with food and health. On one hand, I agree that society is changing their habits with food and our health problem has increased. On the other hand, I’m not sure if we should make a big deal of how people act or eat. When someone enters a fast food area, sits down expecting a waiter/waitress to take their order. That is not going to happen, these areas improves personal skills of doing things on your own. Utensils and the rules of manners do not play a part with a hamburger. Imagine someone using a fork for a hamburger. Would this seem strange or awkward? Of course they would seem awkward and strange. The only time proper manners should occur is at home, school, or a fancy restaurant. Health dilemma, there is no excuse for not feeding your child with healthy food. I understand single mothers have to work double shift to maintain a roof over their child’s head. That is not an excuse for being lazy or taking time to teach your child to prepare something easy and healthy. A mother complicates matters further when she writes, “My husband left us a few years ago and it’s just me and my son now. I work different shifts over at the hospital and don’t have much time to cook.” In other words, this mother believes that it is alright to feed their child every day fast food. This mother is a nurse as a RN they should know that fast food is bad for a child.

Although I agree with Barry Glassner up to a point, I still suggest that the main focus should be on health issues and not how people act when their socializing at these type of places. If mothers would stop to think about their child, not their job, they would realize the risk that may develop into obesity, heart disease, and high cholesterol. Manners at a fast food chain are ridiculous, people choose the way they want to act or eat. Glassner should stop worrying about changes in our behavior and focus more on other important facts.